"I was really pissed at _________ for getting ___________ killed, because _________ had a chance of happiness with _____________."
"But ___________ didn't know the zombies were there!"
"_________ sucks. I hope _________ dies. "
I never thought of this particular scene in that way. I love hearing from the editor what she thinks. Plus, she's emotionally invested in the characters so I must be doing something right!