"I was really pissed at _________ for getting ___________ killed, because _________ had a chance of happiness with _____________."
"But ___________ didn't know the zombies were there!"
"_________ sucks. I hope _________ dies. "
hehehee....
I never thought of this particular scene in that way. I love hearing from the editor what she thinks. Plus, she's emotionally invested in the characters so I must be doing something right!
Right?
Just please tell me you didn't kill the dog.........I'm not sure I could handle it.
ReplyDeleteI'm fairly sure I know what those blanks should say and I have to say I agree with your editor.
ReplyDeleteI think it is very cute how Jack has a big fan base all to his doggy self. :)
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